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Your soft flesh calls to me,
seductively and with passion
not a human-
but a beast,that calls me by my name.

Damn me sweet whore
Take me to the depths from whence you came
I long for your body to be wraped around mine,
your unnatural fire ignites my veins.

You begin to take my life,
while pain and pleasure float in the air,
like unseen aphrodisiacs-
Enticing,calling,longing.

Prolong the pleasure,
bring my death,
your menacing lips shape-
my doom
©2005-2009 ~Archeron15
:iconarcheron15:

Author's Comments

Well..succubus is a band,i aint heard them..nor is this about them lol.
A Succubus,which this is poem is about,is a demonic woman,who seduces men,then getting what they want (usually to kill),they look a little like harpies,i quite like this..my friends might see this as strange as im gay lol ^^ enjoy

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:iconsenoritaluisa:
wow, amazing. i've read myths about the succubus (plural-succubee?) and this hits the nail on the head. Its a great point of view, the damned knows his fate and doesnt care...shows how a guy'll do anything to get some tail, jk jk...i think the poem is deeper than that, i hope. lol, its great, deff a fave. ^-^
:iconarcheron15:
lol thanx alot lauren..the plural is succubi lol latin..yea it is actually deeper than just sex lol,glad u liked it,thanx for the fav :D
:iconpir0:
Lol cool ^^; and who said you had to be thinknig of a woman when writing it, ehhhh? :P [even tho it is about the succubus]

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Ushinawareta tsubasa wo sagashite...
:iconarcheron15:
lol well..i think ill leave my own mind to answer that ^^
:iconcairo-cries:
You could have called it Incubus (male Succubus) and meant the same thing (there's also a pretty popular band named Incubus). But I really liked this.

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good lord.
:iconarcheron15:
yea theyre both bands..yea but incubus isnt always male..can be female or even satyr,but yea guess ur right,tho i still like the succubus lol..glad u liked it ^^ thanx for the fav
:iconcairo-cries:
Haha, no problem.

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good lord.
:iconpetticoat-royalty:
Whoa. This was hot, as well as delicously dark. Your use of words and imagery are perfect, as is the voluptuous shape of this composition. Well done..! You're soooo going on my favorites.

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Yours Truly,
:weed::weed::weed::weed::weed::weed::weed::weed:
:weed:VANESSA SHOGREEN:weed:
:weed::weed::weed::weed::weed::weed::weed::weed:

GET DEVIANT, MUTHAF*CKA :relaxed:
:iconarcheron15:
lol,much thanks,i cant use words like urself yet,but i hope ill get there sumday

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